WJ

Added Appendix and bibliography

This is my completed essay

Introduction

This is my process of description Your initial proposal [|Woo_Jin[1.doc]]

Your Introduction [|Woo Jin Introduction.docx]

Your revised Introduction (but you still need to make the AoI's the __**focus** not something that you 'connect' with as an afterthought)__ [|WJ Introduction (2).docx]

See discussion notes. Some good ideas here, but the focus and direction of your introduction is simply 'adding on' an AoI rather than seeing the AoI as the central main focus.